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The following is the caption that went along with the images on Tumblr, where I originally posted this.

Translation Notes:

• lil hanamaru: was titled Hanamaru-kun in the original text. a hanamaru is a flower drawn on japanese kids’ schoolwork when they do a good job, like a gold star. since the comic shows the flower very obviously here, i couldnt lie to you all and title it Lil’ Gold Star, and i think we have no other flower-related equivalent to this, so ive decided to use this as an opportunity to teach those who dont know this little japanese culture fact. feel free to google what a hanamaru looks like!
• among us: this was titled Infiltration in the original text. because im quirky, i changed it to Among Us. when people complain about translators adding in stuff that didnt exist in the original text, this is exactly what theyre talking about. im so sorry. i have to reference amogus every chance i get (fwiw: i can do this because its just comedy. i wouldnt randomly add funny references during more serious scenes)
• how about a bout: original title was something like “You’re Fighting!?” but uhhhh. okay, i dont even know why i changed the title of this one 😂 i think at the time i couldnt think of a way to translate the title, so i came up with something punny and related to the subject matter. just now as i reread the original text i understood it, but i like my pun better than the original and dont feel like going back and changing it. do you forgive me? 😿
• memory over the material: in the very first panel, testament says in the original text something like “you can’t erase me physically or any other way.” because this is all comedy, i added a reference most tumblr users should get to add to the mood.

i think thats about it! tldr, i think im funny and sacrificed direct translation for comedic effect when i felt like it. common industry practice, really. i wouldnt be so loose when translating if this wasnt all comedy!

In retrospect, I respect my commitment to honesty, but if I had just posted it pretending I made no changes for the sake of comedy would that have been better? No one in the tags reprimanded me for inserting my own sense of humor into the comics, but... hm.....